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My entry for Missi's ACEO contest on Animexx -^o^-
I chose to draw her OCs Joshua and Damian in a nice everyday life situation and their favourite food. :3
Of course the anwer of my little sister after hearing the title of the card was "But there's already salad in the burger! o_O"
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Technique: Copic Multiliner SP in black (Outlines) + Colored Pencils from Jolly
Original Size: 6.4 cm x 8.9 cm
I chose to draw her OCs Joshua and Damian in a nice everyday life situation and their favourite food. :3
Of course the anwer of my little sister after hearing the title of the card was "But there's already salad in the burger! o_O"
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Technique: Copic Multiliner SP in black (Outlines) + Colored Pencils from Jolly
Original Size: 6.4 cm x 8.9 cm
Image size
732x1048px 1.42 MB
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactAfter reading the artist's comments on this work, I wasn't quite getting the feel nor impact that the artist wanted to portray. The composition and character placement look good but, the character don't have the feel they are interacting with each other. The character who is suggesting salad, its actually a little difficult to tell what sort of expression the character wants to portray. I think what might of helped was to have the character's head turned a little more towards the other friend and have the eyes directed towards the friend with the burger. The friend with the burger looks fine for the most part, the hands do look a tad small but it's not too noticeable so I don't think its much of a problem.
I think the only real problem with the piece is just the friend with the salad really, generally I think it was pretty well put overall.